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CONTEMPLATION
[Adam/Larry]
Written back in early August and inspired in part by this picture, which was linked on [livejournal.com profile] 15minuteficlets.
835 words, PG-13, 100% FICTION


Blue sky and red earth reflect in still water.

Date: 2004-09-21 12:52 pm (UTC)
rhythmsextion: (a/l - filthy/gorgeous)
From: [personal profile] rhythmsextion
God, I love waking up in the morning to beautiful fic. Thank you.

I noticed a bit of tense confusion in a few places that I'm sure you'll catch with another read-through (only about two or three of them), but other than that... wow. Seriously. What I love most about this is the pure subtlety. How everything is said between the lines. Because that is EXACTLY how these two would talk, I think. They don't talk with words necessarily and you captured that perfectly. And I love that I knew precisely who each person was even though you never really said. Subtle, easy and precise characterisation. Amazing.

I seriously love you stuff. I want more constantly. So beautiful.

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